Saturday, December 25, 2010

Still Goin' Strong

So I've been wanting to post another flash fiction, but I've just been too busy between family and friends and writing my first feature film, which is coming along very nicely. I really wanted to write some kind of crazy Christmas short, but I just recently got sick and don't have the creative drive.

I got an email from Rob today with details on an independent project that I will most likely be re-writing. Sounds like they've been going through a bit of development hell and have done some re-structuring of their production team. I am extremely excited to work on the project, however the story has gone through no less than twelve drafts and sounds like it needs quite a bit of re-structuring and condensing. Though I'm being asked to do re-writes, I would like to honor the narrative of the previous writer and make sure I'm not destroying his work. I'm excited to be a part of this though. I know the DP pretty well, and it sounds like everyone on the team has pretty stellar work ethic. And with our powers combined...

I believe the original producer of the project has just up and disappeared. No one involved with the project has been able to get ahold of her. This is really unnerving. She seemed to be a really good producer. Hopefully all is well.

Saw "True Grit" with a group of good friends, and it was great! Every character was fun to watch, and the dialogue sounded so good it was almost like music. Coen Brothers at their finest.

Anyway, the feature is making amazing headway. Time to watch "Apocalypse Now" for some inspiration!

Tuesday, December 21, 2010

Ramblings of Ararat

I AM WHERE THE ARK WAS SET!

I promise you.

Though the world was consumed
Though the windows of heaven had opened
And the fountains of the deep had flooded
IT WAS IN FACT I WHO PERSEVERED!

I promise you.

And I am here again
Now after broken promises
I sit and wait to save again

But they can't find me
I am far too deep

Unfathomable, I promise you.

So much that even those who know of me say I am not there

I would rid us of the masks
I would give us faces
I would give us air

And they won't have that
Not ever.
NOT EVER BECAUSE I KNOW
I know...I
Know what...they know
And
They know what I know
And what I know will be the end of the flood

I promise you.

I...PROMISE YOU!

Thursday, December 16, 2010

Whole 'Nother Story

Now, it wasn’t the fact that Sheriff Grip had just gotten devoured by an arachnid the size of a house that scared me, but rather something else. Something deeper. That man wasn’t ever wrong. Not in my entire time growing up in the town of Caleco did I ever witness that man duped. It was chilling, watching his legs disappear into a black blob of legs and hair.

They were saying that something was happening to populations of various species of forest dwellers in the past few months. That, and there were a few disappearances. A few was a hell of a lot for this town.

I noticed something was wrong when all the bird feeders out back were staying full for weeks on end. My backyard was big, and had trees for acres. Seventy-five acres, to be precise. I lived on the outskirts of town. I liked all the people in town, but I liked my wife much better. That was kind of funny because I had only spent fourteen years with her. Spent my whole life with the other people.

Anyway, I had a whole kingdom of bird feeders in my backyard. It was really something else to see the forest animals take to that. Didn’t even have to go through and clean up. Birds, deer, more birds. They polished off the seed like it was nothing. But then, gradually they disappeared. The seed stayed on the lawn.

Well back to Grip. An honest man. Not one to keep things from people. As a lawman, he saw fit that there weren’t anything to be kept. And he was smart. Way smart. Like I really kind of thought of him as some kind of higher conscious. You almost didn’t want to bring up any form of intelligent discussion around him because you felt like you were being monitored and then evaluated. He never said anything though, just sat silently. He was a nice man like that.

Now, if he was talking, and you contradicted him, that was a whole ‘nother story. He’d make sure that you got your facts straight. Ask you a bunch of questions, the kind that you ask when you don’t really want an answer. Whoever tried to top his argument sort of got left in the dust. Been that way since I was a boy.

He didn’t think there was anything out in the woods. There were all kinds of speculation as to the strange events that started happening in our town, but Grip refuted them all. And everyone believed him. Well, that’s not true, not everyone. In fact, a lot of people were getting scared. Angry, too. People and animals were disappearing. This was something that was just too different for our community. It was as if Grip had a big weird blanket that he was muffling everybody with, the way he was refuting everyone’s complaints.

Sooner or later, a body’d been found. Venom. Spider venom. A man wrapped up in silk off in the woods. His body was sucked dry of all fluids. I saw him as they brought him up to town. He had a beard. I think it might have been Jackson. God, he was scary. His body, I mean. He wasn’t Jackson anymore at that point.

Regardless of this, Grip wanted everyone to remain calm. He spent a lot of time blanketing, muffling, and contradicting. About a week I guess. That’s about when we rallied up and stomped over to the town hall. We didn’t feel safe anymore. The seed on my lawn was frightening me. The Sheriff came out and stood in front of all of us. He started blanketing again. People were getting angry. That’s when the spider creeped it’s way over the top of town hall and contradicted Sheriff Grip.

Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Looking Forward to Winter Break

So this probably wasn't the best time to start a blog. I haven't had much time to write due to studying for finals, along with work and class in general. Well, that's kind of bullshit. I've had time to write, however due to the presence of school in my life, I feel the need to balance constructive activity with mindless vegging out (video games). Once this semester ends however, I envision at least somewhat of a surplus of creation. I'll probs write a lot of one-page stories, as well as finish this damn feature, that no one can know anything about.

I don't particularly care for Winter, but I do love the holiday season. Prolly just because I associate this time with getting gifts. I don't really expect anything of anybody anymore though. Feels a lot better to get other people stuff.

It'll be good to see MN peeps. Chillest kids in the Midwest. Good to see my family too. I feel pretty gifted to have nieces and nephews.

So in the film world, my friend and go-to producer Rob Puttkammer held a writer's meeting that he had been talking about all semester. Long story short, he's trying to organize ideas and begin developement on them so he has stuff to shop around as a producer. I was totally psyched for this meeting, some really great writers/film makers were planning on showing up.

I was so excited for this meeting that I missed it. Totally forgot about it. Absolutely no recollection. THIS IS WHAT FINALS WEEK DOES TO YOU.

Well, boring post. I don't really like keeping an online diary. I would have rather posted a story. But this blogging thing seems fun. Shout out to the followers: Zach, Phil, Mike! You guys rule!

Peace

Sunday, December 12, 2010

One of the First On Record

Rex told us to stay away from the bodies and so we did. A dead family: a mom, a dad, son and daughter, and maybe another son or a friend. We weren’t sure. They were all scarred up from head to toe and blood matted down their clothing as they were lying on the forest floor, strung out in front of their cabin. The children had no faces because somebody had unloaded on them with a shotgun. The adults managed to still have half their faces, but their skulls had been blown open; The mother at the forehead, the father at the side.

Now, this had to be the worst crime scene I’d ever bared witness to in my thirty plus years on the force. It was me, Sanders, and Magill and I’d say it was the worst any of us had seen. Well, perhaps not Sanders: he had served in ‘Nam, and I would have too however my hearing’s bad. Magill’s just a kid, I wasn’t sure what he’d seen yet. There was a K-9 with us who had sniffed out the bodies, however they stunk so god damn bad I don’t think we really needed any help.

It was hot, but we had to wait for Rex. I had Magill set up tape. People had to stay away from crime scenes, but we were to understand that this one was different. This one could hurt people. It was strange anyway, the way they were all out on the lawn like that. Didn’t seem to make much sense. Their skin looked as if it had been decomposing for a while, but that didn’t make sense because it had only gotten reported recently and a family had stayed at this site only a week beforehand. These bodies would have had to be here around then.

They also looked like maybe they were all headed in the same direction. They had all been blown onto their backs except for the mother. She was on her belly. Rex got here. He was wearing his sunglasses. He asked us if we had touched the bodies. We said no because we weren’t ordered to.

Just then, the k-9 started sniffing around. His scent trail was leading up over to one of the bodies.

“Don’t let him touch them!’ Rex yelled, but it was too late. The dog shoved his nose into the dad’s hollowed-out temple. Rex said “Ah, shit!” and shot the dog.

“What the hell did you do that for?” Magill was upset about it. I guess he hadn’t seen too much yet.

“Nobody can touch any of them. We gotta burn the bodies. Gotta burn everything.” Rex wasn’t taking shit.

A slight rustling sounded from inside the cabin. We all stopped and drew our guns. Nobody moved for a few seconds. Then out came a tiny little “Don’t shoot!”

“It’s safe now, c’mon out!” Magill said. He was shaking. I thought that was kind of funny.

There was no movement and silence. The house creeked a bit, however, so someone was moving.

“C’mon now, little shooter!” Magill said. Just then, a shotgun came flying out of one of the windows and landed in front if him. Magill jumped. I really thought that was funny so I laughed. The door of the cabin squeaked open, and out ran a crying little boy of Hispanic descent. He made sure not to touch the bodies on his way out. He hugged Magill’s legs.

Rex looked through his sunglasses around at spent shotgun shells on the ground and then looked me in the face. My look back said “Hell if I know, but I sure hope not.”

Saturday, December 11, 2010

We're in a Rut Now.

So this is gonna be short, but I've finally decided that as a writer I best start blogging. I'm gonna post mostly Flash Fiction I write, as well as stuff that goes on in the film student world in the South Loop of Chicago. Oh, and probs video games. Hopefully someone'll read it. I know I would.

Are you supposed to start a paragraph with a tab in one of these posting thingies? I dunno.

Miles